What does stress do to our body?
학생이 쓴 원문
Stress has a bad effect on our health
Stress masks our badies worse and worse
Our head hurts I cant sleep and sometimes
I get a canser
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kay!
2. Stress masks our badies worse and worse.
3. Our head hurts I cant sleep and sometimes.
4. I get a canser.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. Stress has a bad effect on our health.
>>CORRECT!
2. Stress masks our badies worse and worse.
>>Stress makes our bodies feel worse.
3. Our head hurts I cant sleep and sometimes.
>>Our heads may hurt and we won\'t be able to sleep well.
4. I get a canser.
>>We can also get cancer from it.
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