What does success mean to you, and how do you plan to reach it?
학생이 쓴 원문
The success means such not a great thing to me.
If I feel comfortable and am satisfied with my life, it has to be a success.
A famous woman in Youtube said it’s success if there’re nothing to worry and think about when you lie down to sleep on bed. Her saying absolutely inspired me to consider a success because I had spent difficult time on unhappiness.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about success.
~~ Teacher Ryka^^
The success means such not a great thing to me.
>> Success doesn\'t mean much to me.
If I feel comfortable and am satisfied with my life, it has to be a success.
>> If I feel comfortable and satisfied with my life, that\'s a success.
A famous woman in Youtube said it’s success if there’re nothing to worry and think about when you lie down to sleep on bed.
>> A famous woman on YouTube said that success is when you have nothing to worry about and can easily fall asleep in bed.
Her saying absolutely inspired me to consider a success because I had spent difficult time on unhappiness.
>> Her words truly inspired me to redefine success, especially after going through difficult times and unhappiness.
>> Success doesn\'t mean much to me.
If I feel comfortable and am satisfied with my life, it has to be a success.
>> If I feel comfortable and satisfied with my life, that\'s a success.
A famous woman in Youtube said it’s success if there’re nothing to worry and think about when you lie down to sleep on bed.
>> A famous woman on YouTube said that success is when you have nothing to worry about and can easily fall asleep in bed.
Her saying absolutely inspired me to consider a success because I had spent difficult time on unhappiness.
>> Her words truly inspired me to redefine success, especially after going through difficult times and unhappiness.
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