What does success mean to you, and how do you plan to reach it?
학생이 쓴 원문
Success is achieving something that I want it.
It needs efforts and luck.
If the success that I want is huge, I have to effort a lot and I should wait until the time is coming.
Then, If I have good luck, I would have a success.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I do hope you would be successful in the future. You\'ve been giving so much effort these days to reach your goals so I hope luck can guide you to achieve them soon.
~~Teacher RYka^^
Success is achieving something that I want it.
>> Success is achieving something that I want.
It needs efforts and luck.
>> It requires both effort and luck.
If the success that I want is huge, I have to effort a lot and I should wait until the time is coming.
>> If the success I aim for is significant, I must put in a lot of effort and be patient until the right time arrives.
Then, If I have good luck, I would have a success.
>> With good luck, I can achieve success.
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