What does the ideal life look like?

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The ideal life!

>> Correct!

>> OR: My ideal life.

what a beautiful word everyone is eager to have!

>> What a beautiful word that everyone is eager to have!

But, Making their own life ideal is the most difficult for everyone, that might be the reason everyone is hanging.

>> But, making their own life more idealistic is the most difficult one, it might be the reason why some people commit suicide.

Therefore, There have been many arguments of this by philosophers such as Socrates, Plato and so on. 

>> Therefore, there are many arguments from the philosophers such as Socrates, Plato and so on. 

In my opinion, Reducing the criteria for being happy is the best way to get the ideal life.

>> In my opinion, reducing the criteria for being happy is the best way to have an ideal life.

Many people have a quite higher eye level.

>> Many people have a higher eye level.

That makes people feel hungry for everything, even they dont know why they feel like that.

>> That makes people feel hungry for everything, even they don\'t know why they feel that way.

Even if they get to have what they wanted, it is certain that they get to have another one and feel hungry in their own life. 

>> Even if they get to have what they wanted, it is certain that they want to have more and feel hungry in their own life. 

Therefore, I am trying to reducing the criteria for everything which is not easy, of couse.

>> Therefore, I am trying to reduce the criteria for things which is not achievable.

If I have a chance, I want to swipe it out my all criteria like a Budda. For being happy.

>> If I have a chance, I want to get rid of all the criteria for being happy like Buddha.