What does the phrase \"be the change\" mean? Please respond in three to five sentences.

2023-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I think it is related to the mindset. Most people hope to improve their current life. But, they did nothing. Only a few people try to change their life intentionally for better. So, this phrase gives a message to people who want to change.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름] Ho!

To change the world, we must first reform our own nature. 
When we do that, the world takes on a completely different perspective, allowing us to effect change there. 
We will be waiting a lifetime if we wait for others to act on our behalf.

Have a good weekend!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I think it is related to the mindset.
>>> I think it is related to mindset.
Most people hope to improve their current life.
But, they did nothing.
>>> Most people hope to improve their current lives, but they do nothing.
Only a few people try to change their life intentionally for better.
>>> Only a few people try to change their lives intentionally for the better.
So, this phrase gives a message to people who want to change.
>>> CORRECT

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