What does the running boom say about the values or lifestyle trends in South Korea right now?
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Many South Koreans are obsessed with running. According to the research, many sportswear brands including Nike and Adidas recorded the highest profit in Asia. I believe the running boom shows how Koreans are obsessed with personal well-being and exhibitionism. Compared to the facts that South Koreans eat a lot of sweet deserts, many of them are captivated by how well they can enhance their mental and physical strength. There were various supplements to restrict rising blood glucose, and many people choose a lifestyle to soothe mental health. Now South Koreans are moving from so called “Miracle Morning” to “Lazy Morning.” Alongside this, they are captivated by exhibitionism. Many people choose to run because others do too and they tend to get gears which are high-tech and up to trend. Now there are less young Koreans who buy Nike and Adidas, but they are leaning toward On, Alo and Lululemon which are more expensive but more fashionable.
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Thank you for this once again, Aciel. Keep them coming!
Many South Koreans are obsessed with running.
>>> correct
According to the research, many sportswear brands including Nike and Adidas recorded the highest profit in Asia.>>> According to research, many sportswear brands, including Nike and Adidas, recorded their highest profits in Asia.
I believe the running boom shows how Koreans are obsessed with personal well-being and exhibitionism.
>>> correct
Compared to the fact that South Koreans eat a lot of sweet deserts, many of them are captivated by how well they can enhance their mental and physical strength.
>>> correct
There were various supplements to restrict rising blood glucose, and many people choose a lifestyle to soothe mental health.
>>> correct
Now, South Koreans are moving from so called “Miracle Morning” to “Lazy Morning.”
>>> correct
Alongside this, they are captivated by exhibitionism.
>>> correct
Many people choose to run because others do too and they tend to get gears which are high-tech and up to trend.
>>> Many people choose to run because others do, and they tend to buy gear that is high-tech and trendy.
Now there are less young Koreans who buy Nike and Adidas, but they are leaning toward On, Alo and Lululemon which are more expensive but more fashionable.
>>> Nowadays, fewer young Koreans buy Nike and Adidas, as they are leaning toward On, Alo, and Lululemon, which are more expensive but more fashionable.
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