What does the running boom say about the values or lifestyle trends in South Korea right now?
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Running is the big trends in Korea nowadays.
At the same time, sales of alcohol has decreased.
It means people consider their health more than the past.
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Running is the big trends in Korea nowadays.
>> Running is a big trend in Korea nowadays.
At the same time, sales of alcohol has decreased.
>> At the same time, alcohol sales have decreased.
It means people consider their health more than the past.
>> This shows that people are paying more attention to their health than in the past.
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