What does your family do on Thanksgiving Day?
학생이 쓴 원문
We go to My husband \'s mom grave and My husband \'s father a charnel house.
We ara offer a visit to grave and charnel house.
We are go to the movie theater.
For my daughter, we watching the family movie.
Also, we are seafood market. I bought lobster, sashimi after go home .
We are relaxed at home.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Soolyn! It seems that Thanksgiving Day is very special to remember your ancestors and to be with your family! Stay safe!-Faith-
We go to My husband \'s mom grave and My husband \'s father a charnel house.>> We go to my husband\'s mother\'s grave and his father\'s charnel house.
We ara offer a visit to grave and charnel house.
>> We offer a visit to the grave and the charnel house.
We are go to the movie theater.
We ara offer a visit to grave and charnel house.
>> We offer a visit to the grave and the charnel house.
We are go to the movie theater.
>> In addition, we go to a movie theater.
For my daughter, we watching the family movie.
>> For my daughter, we watch a family movie.
Also, we are seafood market.
For my daughter, we watching the family movie.
>> For my daughter, we watch a family movie.
Also, we are seafood market.
>> Also, we go to a seafood market.
I bought lobster, sashimi after go home.
>> We buy lobster and sashimi before we go home.
We are relaxed at home.
We are relaxed at home.
>> After that, we relax at home.
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