What does your favorite beverage or drink remind you of?

2018-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Q ; What does your favorite beverage or drink remind you of? A ; Instant coffee from vending machines is very cheap and tastes great in Korea. Back in University, I used to arrive so early before the class that I could have enough time to enjoy coffee and chatter with my friends. Because we didn’t have any burden of life, every seconds made us happy. Nowadays, when I had some instant coffee especially on rainy days, I reminisced(Ally! You taught me this word. What a wonderful word it is!) my old good days! ---------------------------- The missing attached file contains this! "I noticed that I will meet a substitute teacher and I can postpone the class. But I went through it because I thought that it could be a good chance to meet another teacher. And finally I recognized Ally is the best teacher. ^^"

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


This is one of the most touching compositions you\'ve ever sent.

I always enjoy reading the answers you share with me. ^^

It\'s always full of substance and sincerity.

Keep it up okay?

I miss my college buddies too.

Everything was so much easier back then.

Being an adult is quite overwhelming, right?

But whenever I hear stories about how you struggled to get to where you are now, I get inspired to work harder.

I will forever be grateful for having you as a student! ^^

See you in class!


~~t. Ally




--------------------------------


Instant coffee from vending machines is very cheap and tastes great in Korea.

>> In Korea, instant coffee from vending machines is very cheap, but it tastes great.


Back in University, I used to arrive so early before the class that I could have enough time to enjoy coffee and chatter with my friends.

>> Back in my university days, I used to arrive much earlier before the class started so that I could spend enough time to enjoy a cup of coffee and chat with my friends.


Because we didn’t have any burden of life, every seconds made us happy.

>> Because back then, we didn\'t have any burden in life. Every second made us happy.


 Nowadays, when I had some instant coffee especially on rainy days, I reminisced(Ally! You taught me this word. What a wonderful word it is!) my old good days!

>> Nowadays, when I had some instant coffee, especially on rainy days, I reminisced (I am so happy that you found a use for  this word! ^^) about my good old days!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·