What does your favorite cafe look like?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I like to go to Starbucks and there are several reasons.
First and foremost, one of them is just around the corner from my place so it is a good way to kill time like reading books, watching movies through my smartphone and the like. Apart from that, its signature - woman with a star crown - is really fancy and feel young . That\'s why I often go there. Lastly, the coffee is amazing. I like the smell of it.
강사 첨삭
Happy new week [이름]!
I absolutely love Starbucks too! However, since I brew my own coffee, I order the green tea latte and a slice of cake. Well, the secret to the heavenly scent of coffee in Starbucks is the freshly crushed coffee beans. This releases the smell of coffee like no other. Compared to other cafe that already have ground and brewed coffee in big volumes, the scent has been dispersed on air unlike Starbucks\'.
The next time you go there, observe. Starbucks is a brand that will last for many years because of status and quality. Thanks for sharing this. I will see you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
First and foremost, one of them is just around the corner from my place so it is a good way to kill time like reading books, watching movies through my smartphone and the like.
>> Correct!
Or: ... one of them is it being just around the corner...
Apart from that, its signature - woman with a star crown - is really fancy and feel young .
>> ...and feels young/ youthful.
That\'s why I often go there.
>> Correct!
Lastly, the coffee is amazing.
>> Correct!
I like the smell of it.
>> Correct!
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