What does your ideal playground look like?
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My ideal playground is big slade, 2 swings, big jungle gym and spring riders I want big playground but I like my apartment playground because I played there since long time ago.
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What does your ideal playground look like?
My ideal playground is big slade, 2 swings, big jungle gym and spring riders I want big playground but I like my apartment playground because I played there since long time ago.
>>> My ideal playground has a big slide, two swings, a large jungle gym, and spring riders. I want a big playground, but I like my apartment\'s playground because I\'ve been playing there for a long time.
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