What don\'t you like about your class in school?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like about my class in school first, History class time class many friends presentation opportunity is very small.
second, my friends they are a very loud voice with class time.
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What don\'t you like about your class in school?
I don\'t like about my class in school first, History class time class many friends presentation opportunity is very small.
>> The things I don\'t like about my class in school are, first, the history class time class because many of my classmates\' presentation opportunities are very limited.
second, my friends they are a very loud voice with class time.
>> Second, my friends and classmates are very loud during class time.
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