What drink do you often have but best avoided?
학생이 쓴 원문
I used to drink coke with meal.
When I drank coke, I seemed that all my stress is gone. I had known that coke is very bad for my health.
But I couldn’t stop.
One day, my daughters said me why mom always drink coke, it is very bad for you!.
I was very embarrassed.
So I decided to stop it.
Now, I secretly often drink energy drinks with meal. But I know I should stop drinking this beverage as possible as I stop.
But it doesn’t go my way.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]! How\'s your Sunday? I guess parents should set a good example haha.. Your daughters are smart and brave :)
Aki:)
I used to drink coke with meal.
>>> I used to drink coke during my meals.
When I drank coke, I seemed that all my stress is gone. I had known that coke is very bad for my health.
When I drank coke, I seemed that all my stress is gone. I had known that coke is very bad for my health.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Drinking coke became my stress reliever. I had known for long that coke is not good for our health
But I couldn’t stop.
But I couldn’t stop.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> But I couldn\'t help it
One day, my daughters said me why mom always drink coke, it is very bad for you!.
One day, my daughters said me why mom always drink coke, it is very bad for you!.
>>> One day, my daughters told me that I always drink coke and it is very bad for me.
I was very embarrassed.
I was very embarrassed.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> It was embarrassing.
So I decided to stop it.>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> So i decided to stop drinking coke.
Now, I secretly often drink energy drinks with meal. But I know I should stop drinking this beverage as possible as I stop.>>> Now, I secretly often drink energy drinks with meal. But I know I should also stop drinking this beverage as soon as possible.
But it doesn’t go my way.>>> CORRECT!
OR >> But I also couldn\'t help it.
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