What drink do you often have but best avoided?
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ESSAY QUESTION: What drink do you often have but best avoided?
I like to have various soft drinks such as cider, cola, pocari sweat and many kinds of fruit juices, etc.
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or>>I enjoy drinking different sodas such as cider, cola, pocari sweat, other types of fruit juices, etc.
Among these drinks, I often drink cola but whenever I buy it, I always hesitate to drink it
>>Among these drinks, I often drink cola. But whenever I buy it, I always hesitate to drink it.
or>>I usually drink cola from among these drink selections. But every time I buy one, I always hesitate drinking it.
because I can\'t help thinking my health.
>>Because, I keep thinking of my health.
So, cola is one of the best drink I wish to avoid, so to speak.
>>Thus, cola is one of the best drinks I wish to avoid, so to speak.
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