What drink do you often have but best avoided?

2018-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I like to have various soft drinks such as cider, cola, pocari sweat and many kinds of fruit juices etc.. Among these drinks, I often drink cola but whenever I buy it, I always hesitate to drink it because I can't help thinking my health. So, cola is one of the best drink I wish to avoid, so to speak.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dr. [이름]!

Thank you so much for the answer!

I appreciate it a lot! Please keep up the good work!  

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION: What drink do you often have but best avoided?

I like to have various soft drinks such as cider, cola, pocari sweat and many kinds of fruit juices, etc.

CORRECT!

or>>I enjoy drinking different sodas such as cider, cola, pocari sweat, other types of fruit juices, etc.

Among these drinks, I often drink cola but whenever I buy it, I always hesitate to drink it

>>Among these drinks, I often drink cola. But whenever I buy it, I always hesitate to drink it.

or>>I usually drink cola from among these drink selections. But every time I buy one, I always hesitate drinking it.

because I can\'t help thinking my health.

>>Because, I keep thinking of my health.

So, cola is one of the best drink I wish to avoid, so to speak. 

>>Thus, cola is one of the best drinks I wish to avoid, so to speak. 

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