What effect does COVID-19 have on mental stress? How can a person best overcome it?
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As the COVID-19 pandemic sweeps across the world, it is causing widespread concern, fear and anxiety which are natural and normal reactions to the changing and uncertain situation that everyone finds themselves in. The issue facing everyone is how we manage and react to the stressful situation in our lives and communities. Most government restricted people to gather in the places that might be easily infected such as church, concert hall and so on. Everybody would like to go out after this pandemic but professionals reported this will last until the vaccine develop. Nobody still know when the vaccine release. This makes people stressful. Students go to school once a week and have to take their study at home through online contents. Parents have had a problem about taking care of their children because there are nobody who can spend time with children. These days, both parents are usually working together to support their family. In these circumstances, I don\'t know what the best way to
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Thanks Mr. [이름]~! ^^ I missed so many activities outside home. But I\'d rather stay home all day long than going somewhere and get infected. kkk Stay safe.
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As the COVID-19 pandemic sweeps across the world, it is causing widespread concern, fear and anxiety which are natural and normal reactions to the changing and uncertain situation that everyone finds themselves in.
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The issue facing everyone is how we manage and react to the stressful situation in our lives and communities.
>>> The issue everyone is facing is how we manage and react to the stressful situation in our lives and communities.
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Most government restricted people to gather in the places that might be easily infected such as church, concert hall and so on.
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Everybody would like to go out after this pandemic but professionals reported this will last until a vaccine is developed.
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Nobody still know when the vaccine release.
>>> Nobody knows when the vaccine would be released.
This makes people stressful.
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Students go to school once a week and have to take their study at home through online contents.
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Parents have had a problem about taking care of their children because there are nobody who can spend time with them.
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These days, both parents are usually working together to support their family.
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With these circumstances, I don\'t know what the best ways to...
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