What effect does violence in movies or video games have on kids?
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Wow, I think it\'s the opposite of whether sex education is important. But, I don\'t believe a kind of violence in movies and video games could effect to kids. Do you remember? When we were younger, we used to play that games by u[이름]g our parents\' ID number. But, I didn\'t copy that like games. I\'m sure even the kids can know what is the right or not. Otherwise, it\'s the parents\' responsibility.
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Wishing you a happy Friday, Elic! Enjoy life no matter how hard it may seem. When life gives you a thousand reasons to cry, show the world that you have a million reasons to smile. ^^ You did wonderful today. Keep up the good work.
Wow, I think it\'s the opposite of whether sex education is important.
>>> Wow, I think it\'s the opposite of whether sex education is important.
But, I don\'t believe a kind of violence in movies and video games could effect to kids.
>>> But I don\'t believe the kind of violence in movies and video games could affect kids.
Do you remember? When we were younger, we used to play that games by u[이름]g our parents\' ID number.
>>> Do you remember? When we were younger, we used to play those games by u[이름]g our parents\' ID numbers.
But, I didn\'t copy that like games.
>>> But I didn\'t copy that like in games.
I\'m sure even the kids can know what is the right or not.
>>> I\'m sure even the kids can tell if something is right or not.
Otherwise, it\'s the parents\' responsibility.
>>> CORRECT.
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