What efforts did you make to go to exchange students? - interview script
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-T. Maine
First, I studied hard in the major classes, so I can learn easily about that even if the class’s language is different.
>>First, I did my best studying my major subjects, so I can easily learn them even if I have difficulty understanding the language abroad.
Second, I study English for TOEIC exam and I have be having a English speaking class for the abroad life.
>>Second, I am studying English for my TOEIC exam and I have been taking English classes.
If I’m successful for this applying, I will keep going this class until I leave.
>>If I am accepted in the program, I will continue studying until I leave.
Third, I have did exercise in the gym and I have had personal training of weight training, since March, this year.
>>Third, I have been working out in the gym because I need to keep my body fit and healthy.
It will make me energy to adapt to new environment.
>>It will also help me stronger to defeat possible diseases when I go to a new environment.
Many Finnish young people are interested in indoor exercise, so I can easily hang out with them for common interest.
>>Many youngsters in Finland are intrested in indoor exercise, so I can easily get along with them.
Finally, I have many experiences like contests, supporters and leader of team and clubs.
>>Finally, I have many experiences and awards in competitions as well as being a team leader of clubs.
It will be helpful for exchange student life.
>>I think these things qualify me to be an exchange student.
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