What else do you need today?

Today is friday. I enrolled ballet class for February. I should go there threes times for a week. So I have to go ballet class. Why I signed up for that? Because i decide to make my body healthy and love my self. In practice, after i start the exercise, i feel better and i started considering the food that i eat. I really love ballet and recommend it to my best friend. So One of my friends started to it with me! If i be professional for ballet, I will dance with love song “can i be him” haha

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What else do you need today?

Today is Friday.

CORRECT!

or>>It’s Friday today.

I enrolled ballet class for February.

>>I enrolled in a ballet class for the month of February.

I should go there threes times for a week.

>>I have to go there three times a week.

So I have to go ballet class.

>>So, I have to go to my ballet class.

Why I signed up for that?

>>Why did I sign up for the class?

Because i decide to make my body healthy and love my self.

>>Because, I decided to keep my body stay healthy since I love my self.

In practice, after i start the exercise, i feel better and i started considering the food that i eat.

>>In practice, after I started exercising, I feel better. After that, I began considering the food I’m eating.

I really love ballet and recommend it to my best friend.

>>I really love ballet so I recommend it to my best friend.

So One of my friends started to it with me!

>>So, one of my friends started to do it with me!

If i be professional for ballet, I will dance with love song “can i be him” haha

>>If I become a professional ballet dancer, I will dance with the love song called “Can I be him” hahaha….