What excites you most about organoid research?
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you for interesting my field and questioning organoids.
There are many field using organoids like regenerative medicine, new drug development or test of medicine efficacy and toxicity.
Among them, I am excited in medicine toxicity test. That is important because new medicine have efficacy but It can have potential side effect. Seriously, If people would not consider its toxicity, They may be able to die. So, To check medicine toxicity is essential process.
To do test method is various. First, we choose specific organ to do test new medicine. Usually we do this test according to asking client. So, we consider their asking. If they want to test in liver, we start to make liver organoids. There are may organs in the humans like liver, heart, kidney. The representative toxicity test organ is liver. If we choice liver, the next step is considering cell type. There are also many cell types to make organoids like iPSCs, ASC. After we make organoids, we test real liver toxicity test.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji[이름], this was an impressive effort! You explained a very technical and scientific field in English, which is not easy to do. Your writing shows that you have deep knowledge about organoids and how they are used in medicine. I admire your clarity and passion. It really shows how important this research is. I also find it both honest and fascinating how straightforward you are in describing the risks and importance of toxicity testing. Your response is quite entertaining because you balance seriousness with simplicity, making a complex field easier to understand.
Keep up this excellent work. You are not only practicing English but also training yourself to communicate science effectively, which is a very powerful skill. I’m really proud of how you’re explaining such advanced topics.
~ T. Lia
Thank you for interesting my field and questioning organoids.
>> Thank you for showing interest in my field and asking about organoids.
There are many field using organoids like regenerative medicine, new drug development or test of medicine efficacy and toxicity.
>> There are many fields that use organoids, such as regenerative medicine, new drug development, or testing medicine efficacy and toxicity.
Among them, I am excited in medicine toxicity test.
>> Among them, I am most interested in medicine toxicity testing.
That is important because new medicine have efficacy but It can have potential side effect.
>> This is important because while new medicines can be effective, they may also have potential side effects.
Seriously, If people would not consider its toxicity, They may be able to die.
>>Seriously, if people do not consider its toxicity, they could die.
So, To check medicine toxicity is essential process.
>>So, checking medicine toxicity is an essential process.
To do test method is various.
>> There are various methods to do the test.
First, we choose specific organ to do test new medicine.
>> First, we choose a specific organ to test the new medicine.
Usually we do this test according to asking client. So, we consider their asking.
>> Usually, we conduct this test according to the client’s request, so we consider their instructions.
If they want to test in liver, we start to make liver organoids.
>> If they want to test on the liver, we start by making liver organoids.
There are may organs in the humans like liver, heart, kidney.
>> There are many organs in humans, such as the liver, heart, and kidney.
The representative toxicity test organ is liver.
>> The main organ used for toxicity testing is the liver.
If we choice liver, the next step is considering cell type.
>> If we choose the liver, the next step is to consider the cell type.
There are also many cell types to make organoids like iPSCs, ASC.
>> There are also many cell types used to make organoids, such as iPSCs and ASCs.
After we make organoids, we test real liver toxicity test.
>> After we make the organoids, we perform an actual liver toxicity test.
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