What exotic food would you like to try?
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Well, except for dog meat, Tofu, and fried insects, I\'d love to try crocodile meat. I\'ve just heard about it [이름]ce I came to Australia. So, I really wonder what tastes. I can see that in a supermarket easily, it\'s a similar price to other meat like pork, beef. And, I was culture shocked when I saw a crocodile\'s tail. Some people said it has more protein than chicken, do you believe it? That\'s why most people in Australia are muscular.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, except for dog meat, Tofu, and fried insects, I\'d love to try crocodile meat.
>> CORRECT!I\'ve just heard about it [이름]ce I came to Australia.
>> CORRECT!So, I really wonder what tastes.
>> So, I really wonder how it tastes like.
I can see that in a supermarket easily, it\'s a similar price to other meat like pork, beef.
>> I can see that in a supermarket easily, the price is similar to other kinds of meat like pork and beef.
And, I was culture shocked when I saw a crocodile\'s tail.
>> CORRECT!Some people said it has more protein than chicken, do you believe it?
>> CORRECT!That\'s why most people in Australia are muscular.
>> CORRECT!
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