What factors influence a career choice?

So in conclusion, aptitude, interest and environment affects our career choice. 

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It is important for people to choose suitable jobs.

>> Correct!

If they get a job they don\'t like, their quality of life will be decreased.

>> Correct!

Then, what kind of things we consider when we choose our jobs?

>> Then what kind of things should we consider in choosing our jobs?
 First, an aptitude is one of the most important factors when we get a job.

>> First. our aptitude, it\'s one of the most important factors in getting a job.

Many people say that we should do what we can do well.

>> Correct!

If you get praised for your talents and become convinced of them, you will consider them seriously when you make a career choice.

>> If you get praised for your talents and are convinced of them, you will consider them seriously when making a career choice.
 Second, an interest affects choosing a career.

>> Secondly, our interests affects our chosen career.

We want to do what we like because we can enjoy the thing we like.

>> We want to do what we like because we can enjoy the things we like.
 Lastly, the environment is a vital factor which influences a career choice.

>> Correct!

People are influenced by things around them.

>> Correct!

An aptitude and an interest are also affected by the environment.

>> Correct!

What family they have, how they are eudcated, or how many chances they have to experience various jobs…….

>> What family they have, how they are eudcated, or the number of chances they have to experience various jobs.

 Those things are factors affecting a career choice while we don\'t recognize them.

>>  Those things are factors affecting our career choice that we don\'t recognize.