What facts my school have.
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First. my school has rules.
Second, my school has students more than 1000.
Third, my school has teachers more than 20.
Lastly, my school doesn\'t have 7th period.
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First. my school has rules.
>> CORRECT!
Second, my school has students more than 1000.
Second, my school has students more than 1000.
>> Second, my school has more than a thousand students.
Third, my school has teachers more than 20.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are more than 20 teachers in my schoo.
Lastly, my school doesn\'t have 7th period.
>> CORRECT!
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