What fantasy story or movie do you like? Share the plot of the story and explain why you like it.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like the story of Harry Potter. There\'s a strong villain called Voldmort and the main plot of the story is that Harry fights with Voldmort.
There\'s lots of other episodes beside the main plot so I like it. It\'s very very fun.
강사 첨삭
Hi Rosie!
I\'m glad we would be able to study from now on.
Make sure to always express yourself.
Keep practicing so I can check your progress.
I look forward to your next composition.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like the story of Harry Potter.
>> Correct
There\'s a strong villain called Voldmort and the main plot of the story is that Harry fights with Voldmort.
>> There\'s a strong villain called Voldemort and the main plot of the story is that Harry fights with Voldemort.
There\'s lots of other episodes beside the main plot so I like it.
There\'s lots of other episodes beside the main plot so I like it.
>> There are a lot of other storylines besides the main plot so I like it.
It\'s very very fun.
>> Correct
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