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학생이 쓴 원문
When I studied in college, I had a fantasy about my job.
My [이름]d had changed as I had graduated.
I tried to get a salary or a job that other people would recognize than a dream.
I got to think a lot about my dream job and reality.
I am still not sure what`s important when choosing a job.
It`s good to follow my dreams, though.
Basically, I thought I had to have an income to maintain my daily life.
Then the working and co-worker and my aptitude.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. You did great and please keep up the good work. You\'ve improved a lot.
-T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> When I was studying in college, I dreamed about my job.
>> My [이름]d changed when I graduated.
>> I got a job that other people would recognize instead of my dream job.
I got to think a lot about my dream job and reality.
>> I thought about my dream job and real job.
>> CORRECT
>> It\'s good to follow my drea[이름]
>> Basically, I thought I need an income to live my daily life.
>> Also, working with co-workers and my aptitude should be thought of.
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