What fears do you have for the future?
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Well, I have some fears in my future. The first thing is getting older. As I always mention to you, time flies so faster than before becoming an adult. Also, I can feel bored easily because there are very few new experiences that I\'ve been. Second, I\'m afraid whether I\'ll be married with Australia\'s girlfriend or not. Even if I wish to do that, it\'s hard to do it in a reality. With short blonde hair, I\'m still looking for a woman. Finally, it\'s an worry about my future. I don\'t know what it\'s going to happen. It\'ll be a good thing or bad thing. However, I don\'t believe only good things will happen to me. If I try to think about it, I would overcome it. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, I have some fears in my future.
>> Well, I have some fears about my future.
The first thing is getting older.
>> CORRECT!As I always mention to you, time flies so faster than before becoming an adult.
>> As I always mention to you, time flies faster than before becoming an adult.
Also, I can feel bored easily because there are very few new experiences that I\'ve been.
>> CORRECT!Second, I\'m afraid whether I\'ll be married with Australia\'s girlfriend or not.
>> Second, I\'m afraid whether I\'ll be married with an Australian girlfriend or not.
Even if I wish to do that, it\'s hard to do it in a reality.
>> Even if I wish to do that, it\'s hard to do it in reality.
With short blonde hair, I\'m still looking for a woman.
>> CORRECT!Finally, it\'s an worry about my future.
>> Finally, I worry about my future, generally.
I don\'t know what it\'s going to happen.
>> I don\'t know what\'s going to happen.
It\'ll be a good thing or a bad thing.
>> CORRECT!However, I don\'t believe only good things will happen to me.
>> CORRECT!If I try to think about it, I would overcome it. :)
>> CORRECT!
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