What festivals do you have in your city? Can you explain what happens during those occasions?
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a book festival in my citiy.
I read a book at the book festival.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Festivals are an expressive way to celebrate glorious heritage, culture and traditions. They are meant to rejoice special moments and emotions in our lives with our loved ones. They play an important role to add structure to our social lives, and connect us with our families and backgrounds. They give us a distraction from our day to day, exhausting routine of life, and give us some inspiration to remember the important things and moments in life. Festivals were started to pass the legends, knowledge and traditions onto the next generation.
There is a book festival in my citiy.
>> There is a book festival in my city.
I read a book at the book festival.
>> I usually read books during that festival.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.