What festivals or celebrations does your country have during the changing of the seasons? Which one
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I think the representative one is a sports day.
Between the spring and the summer, the schools usually hold a sports day.
The students do various kinds of sports in the day.
I don\'t know why, but all the schools hold the sports day between the spring and the summer.
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Those sound like great festivals! I\'m sure everyone would enjoy that.
I think the representative one is a sports day.
>> I think the first one on the list would be \"Sports Day\".
Between the spring and the summer, the schools usually hold a sports day.
>>< Between spring and summer, the schools usually hold a sports day.
The students do various kinds of sports in the day.
>> The students do various kinds of sports in a day.
I don\'t know why, but all the schools hold the sports day between the spring and the summer.
>> I don\'t know why, but all the schools hold a sports day between the spring and the summer.
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