What first inspired your passion for playing the violin?

2025-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lia

학생이 쓴 원문

It is my wife who gave me a passion for playing the violin. My wife has always been my music teacher. She always gave me a good solution whenever I was in trouble with music. My wife majored in piano and she has the talent to play almost any instrument if she wants to. It was my wife who gave me passion for playing the classical guitar more than 20 years ago, and it is my wife who inspired me to play the violin now. It is also my wife who inspired my life goals. However, it has been a long time since she lost her passion for music. I also consulted with her when I started playing the violin and she recommended it to me. Marital relationships cannot be maintained only by the passion of love. Sometimes as friends, sometimes as advisors, sometimes as counselors, if they can inspire each other in different parts of their lives, I think the couple is moving in the right direction.

강사 첨삭

Hi David. It’s so nice to see you being so passionate about playing the violin! I can tell how much effort you’ve put into your practice and how much you’ve grown since you started sharing about it. It’s inspiring to watch someone dive into music with such dedication. Keep up the great work, and don’t be afraid to push yourself even further. You’ve got so much potential. Keep playing and enjoy every moment of it.


~ T. Lia


It is my wife who gave me a passion for playing the violin.
>> CORRECT


My wife has always been my music teacher.
>> CORRECT


She always gave me a good solution whenever I was in trouble with music.
>> She always gave me good solutions whenever I was in trouble with music.


My wife majored in piano and she has the talent to play almost any instrument if she wants to.
>> CORRECT


It was my wife who gave me passion for playing the classical guitar more than 20 years ago, and it is my wife who inspired me to play the violin now.
>> It was my wife who gave me a passion for playing the classical guitar more than 20 years ago, and it is my wife who inspires me to play the violin now.


It is also my wife who inspired my life goals.
>> CORRECT


However, it has been a long time since she lost her passion for music.
>> CORRECT


I also consulted with her when I started playing the violin and she recommended it to me.
>> CORRECT


Marital relationships cannot be maintained only by the passion of love.
>> Marital relationships cannot be maintained by the passion of love alone.


Sometimes as friends, sometimes as advisors, sometimes as counselors, if they can inspire each other in different parts of their lives, I think the couple is moving in the right direction.
>> CORRECT

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