What flavor of ice cream do you wish existed?
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm not great Ice cream eaters because most it is high in calories.
I ate Ice cream in summer, though. Nowadays there are many different flavors of ice cream.
I like salmon because it tastes very nice so I hope I can eat Salmon flavor of ice cream!
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Nova
I\'m not great Ice cream eaters because most it is high in calories. >> I don\'t eat ice cream that much because it is high in calories.
I ate Ice cream in summer, though. Nowadays there are many different flavors of ice cream.
>> I eat ice cream in summer, though. Nowadays, there are many different ice cream flavors.
I like salmon because it tastes very nice so I hope I can eat Salmon flavor of ice cream!
I ate Ice cream in summer, though. Nowadays there are many different flavors of ice cream.
>> I eat ice cream in summer, though. Nowadays, there are many different ice cream flavors.
I like salmon because it tastes very nice so I hope I can eat Salmon flavor of ice cream!
>> I like salmon-flavored ice cream because it tastes nice and I hope I can eat it again.
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