What food did you try when you went to [이름]gary?

2025-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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actually when i went to [이름]gary, i mostly ate korean restaurant style food in [이름]gary. and sometimes my roommate was cooked korean food. mostly ate tteokbokki. but sometimes we ate steak, pizza, big size hambergur(same as hand size) i ate macdonald\'s menu macmorning everyday in morning. because our company was provide corporate card. Tokaine Wine is famous in [이름]gary. so i ate delicious, amount steaks and a lot of Tokaine Wine drunk.

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Hello, [이름]!
First, thank you for sending a picture. That was indeed a big burger, and it looks delicious. Thank you for sharing with me about [이름]gary\'s famous wine. I tried to search for it, and I think the English spelling is \'Tokaji.\' It\'s a good thing you were able to try different food in [이름]gary, but I just noticed that when you, Koreans, go to other countries, you usually still crave Korean food.
- T. Caitlyn 
actually when i went to [이름]gary, i mostly ate korean restaurant style food in [이름]gary.
>> Actually, when I went to [이름]gary, I mostly ate Korean restaurant-style food there.
and sometimes my roommate was cooked korean food.
>> And sometimes, my roommate cooked Korean food.
mostly ate tteokbokki. but sometimes we ate steak, pizza, big size hambergur(same as hand size)
>> I mostly ate tteokbokki, but sometimes we ate steak, pizza, and big-sized hamburgers (same as hand size).
i ate macdonald\'s menu macmorning everyday in morning. 
>> I ate McDonald\'s McMorning menu every morning 
because our company was provide corporate card.
>> Because our company provided a corporate card.
Tokaine Wine is famous in [이름]gary.
>> Tokaji wine is famous in [이름]gary.
so i ate delicious, amount steaks and a lot of Tokaine Wine drunk.
>> So, I ate delicious steaks and drank a lot of Tokaji wine.

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