What food do you need to eat so that you can be healthier?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t eat instant or delivery food. I eat balanced meals with protein, carbohydrates, and fats. I eat chicken, fish, beans, and tofu for protein.
I also eat rice and healthy fats for energy. Because I cannot eat much one time,I often eat small meals, so I can stay strong.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
Congratulations for a perfectly composed answer! Your sentences are a combination of simple to complex ones. Soon, you will be able to write longer sentences using the correct connectors such as prepositions, conjunctions, among others.
I would like to apologize again for the mistake I made in marking your class \'absent\'. It was an honest mistake. I will explain it in class soon.
Thank you for your effort. diligence, and perseverance in English!
See you soon.
-T. Donna~
I also eat rice and healthy fats for energy. Because I cannot eat much one time,I often eat small meals, so I can stay strong.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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