What food do you want to eat during winter season?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to eat BBQ in camping site.
Because l have wished going camping for a long time. And l want to cook BBQ with my boyfriend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this one. Going camping with a boyfriend sounds exciting. Barbeque is the best to have when camping out, especially having it with ramen.
- T. Beth
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I want to eat BBQ in camping site.
Because l have wished going camping for a long time. And l want to cook BBQ with my boyfriend.
>>>> CORRECT.
>>>> OR: I want to have BBQ in the camping site. I have been wishing to go camping for a long time and I want to cook BBQ with my boyfriend.
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