What food from another country would you like to try when given the chance? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to try Peking Duck that is a traditional Chinese food. I like bird food like chicken. So,I think I can eat Peking Duck well. And, I want to try another bird food of world.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for taking time answering your homework. I hope you get to eat Peking Duck soon.
~T. Divina^^
1. I want to try Peking Duck that is a traditional Chinese food.
>>CORRECT!
OR >>I want to try Peking Duck, a traditional Chinese food.
2. I like bird food like chicken.
>>I like to eat poultry dishes like chicken.
(Using \'bird food\' in the sentence might make people think that you want to eat the food of the birds.^^)
3. So, I think I can eat Peking Duck well.
>>CORRECT!
OR>> Therefore, I think I can eat Peking Duck well.
4. And, I want to try another bird food of world.
>> I also want to try other poultry dishes all around the world.
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