What food would you always like to buy for your family?

2022-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi. teacher It rained a lot , yesterday. I went to the work site \"Yangp[이름]\",I did worked decoration. Many of delevary boxes(60~70ea)did unboxing. and that are check and decoration. So i\'m tired. Homework What food would you always like to buy for your family? I always like to buy vegetable side dishes for my family. It buy spinach greens, Bean sprouts etc. Sometime I buy roasted fish. I hope healthy to my family. But they like snack ang hamberger, pizza. Then I am annoyed.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Soolyn! I could feel your exhaustion after traveling and working hard. I hope your work is successful. Thank you for doing your homework despite your busy schedule!-Faith-

Hi. teacher
>> Hi, teacher!
It rained a lot , yesterday.

>> It rained a lot yesterday.

I went to the work site \"Yangp[이름]\",I did worked decoration.

>> I went to our worksite in Yangp[이름], and I did the decoratng.
Many of delevary boxes(60~70ea)did unboxing. and that are check and decoration.

>> Many of the delivery boxes (60~70ea) were unboxed and those were checked and used for decoration, so I\'m tired.
Homework

>> CORRECT
What food would you always like to buy for your family?
>> CORRECT
I always like to buy vegetable side dishes for my family.

>> CORRECT

It buy spinach greens, Bean sprouts etc.

>> I buy green spinach, bean sprouts, etc.
Sometime I buy roasted fish.

>> Sometimes, I buy roasted fish.

I hope healthy to my family.

>> I hope my family is healthy.

But they like snack ang hamberger, pizza. Then I am annoyed.

>> But, they like snacks like hamburger and pizza, so I am annoyed

OR However, they like snacks like hamburger and pizza, so I am annoyed.

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