What food would you like to learn how to cook and why?

2021-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to learn how to bake many kinds of breads. Because I don\'t want to learn how to cook other things but I want to bake a bread. And it is goot to do a lot of things that I want so I want to bake a lot kinds of breads. So I want to learn how to bake many kinds of breads.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Wow that sounds good! I think everyone will like your baking if you do that. :)

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I want to learn how to bake many kinds of breads.

>> CORRECT

Because I don\'t want to learn how to cook other things but I want to bake a bread.

>> It is because I prefer baking.

And it is goot to do a lot of things that I want so I want to bake a lot kinds of breads.

>>It is good to do a lot of things that I want so I want to learn how to bake different kinds of breads.

So I want to learn how to bake many kinds of breads.

>> So this is why I want to learn how to bake many kinds of breads.

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