What foods are good for your health? How important is healthy food to staying healthy?
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Well, theoretically specaking, food that is not salty, sweet, not spicy, and not sour is healthy food. But it son\'t taste food.
In my opinion, if you don\'t eat fermented food or non-fast food, even if it\'s fried, salty, sweet, spicy, or sour, it\'s good for your health if you don\'t eat it too much and often.
And then, I think healthy food accounts for more than 90% of 100% of maintaining health. Although it is an extreme example, there is an example that a person with cancer has improved a lot through diet control.
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Thank you so much for submitting your homework as you share your thoughts about healthy food. Let\'s stay healthy! ^^
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Well, theoretically specaking, food that is not salty, sweet, not spicy, and not sour is healthy food.
>> Well, theoretically speaking, food that is not salty, sweet, spicy, and sour is healthy.
But it son\'t taste food.
>> But it doesn\'t taste like food.
In my opinion, if you don\'t eat fermented food or non-fast food, even if it\'s fried, salty, sweet, spicy, or sour, it\'s good for your health if you don\'t eat it too much and often.
>> CORRECT.
And then, I think healthy food accounts for more than 90% of 100% of maintaining health.
>> And then, I think healthy food accounts for more than 90% of maintaining good health.
Although it is an extreme example, there is an example that a person with cancer has improved a lot through diet control.
>> Although it is an extreme example, there have been cases where people with cancer improved their health through dietary control.
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