What foods do you think you\'d find impossible to give up?
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, this question is very difficult to answer in my mind. Because there are so many delicious food impossible to give up. So I need to think about that very considerably. Well.. Above all,, I like rice and flour-based food such as bread, noodle, pancake. Of course I like vegetables, meat and fish. That means choosing one thing is very hard situation. ㅠ.ㅠ Especially, the rice and flour make any food what I want to eat. Anyway,,That\'s time to wrap up this choice. The only one thing impossible to give up is rice-based food. When I was young like 1 years.. kk... I have eaten the rice basically. So I will choose the food impossible to give up that is the rice! My essay is too messy because of thinking about food that l like.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon^^
HAHAHA - I do understand how you feel.
Food is something that we can\'t really give up.
Anyhow, I think you made a good choice. - kkk
First of all, this question is very difficult to answer in my mind.
>>> CORRECT!
Because there are so many delicious food impossible to give up.
>>> Because there are so many delicious food that is impossible to give up.
OR: Because there are many delicious foods that I can\'t give up.
So I need to think about that very considerably.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: So I need to think about it very seriously.
Well.. Above all,, I like rice and flour-based food such as bread, noodle, pancake.
>>> Well, most of all, I like flour based food such as rice, bread, noodles, and pancakes.
Of course I like vegetables, meat and fish.
>>> CORRECT!
That means choosing one thing is very hard situation. ㅠ.ㅠ
>>> It means that it is a very difficult situation to choose one thing.
Especially, the rice and flour make any food what I want to eat.
>>> CORRECT!
Anyway,,That\'s time to wrap up this choice.
>>> Anyway, it\'s time to wrap up this choice.
The only one thing impossible to give up is rice-based food.
>>> CORRECT!
When I was young like 1 years.. kk...
>>> When I was young like a year old.
I have eaten the rice basically.
>>> I basically have eaten rice.
So I will choose the food impossible to give up that is the rice!
>>> So I will choose rice as a food that is hard to give up!
My essay is too messy because of thinking about food that l like.
>>> My essay is so messy thinking about my favorite foods.
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