What foods have you tasted which you will never forget for the rest of your life?

2015-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There are some foods that I still remember. Most of them are the foods when I’ve tasted in my younger days. The noodle with red bean soup was one of my favorites. My family grew wheat. When they harvested it for the first time a year, my grandmother used to make the noodle with the flour made from the first harvested wheat. She made a dough, cut it into thin slices and put them into the boiled water with mashed red beans. We even invited our neighbors and our front yard was packed with people to enjoy the red bean noodle at the beautiful autumn evening. The second memorable food is Kimchi stew made by my grandmother. The Kimchi stew did not look different, however, it had really rich flavor that was different from many other Kimchi stews. The slices of pork were added, which made it more delicious.I sometimes go to a restaurant that serve the same dishes, however, they taste different from what I remember. My wife even sometimes makes kimchi stew, but it is way different from the one.

강사 첨삭

hello there Sir [이름]!

Yahoo! It\'s hump day again. ^^

I felt hungry after reading your composition. Hihihihi.

I want to try Kimchi stew.

Anyway, we are not going to have a class on Friday.

Because it is a national holiday in our country.

We can talk about it in class.

Teacher Nina


There are some foods that I still remember.

>> correct

Most of them are the foods when I’ve tasted in my younger days.

>> correct

>> Most of them are the foods that I have tasted when I was young.

The noodle with red bean soup was one of my favorites.

>> correct

My family grew wheat.

>> correct

When they harvested it for the first time a year, my grandmother used to make the noodle with the flour made from the first harvested wheat.

>> Did you mean: When they harvested it for the first time, my grandmother used to make noodle with flour made from the first harvested wheat.

>> My grandmother made a noodle with flour from the wheat that was harvested for the first time.

She made a dough, cut it into thin slices and put them into the boiled water with mashed red beans.

>> correct

We even invited our neighbors and our front yard was packed with people to enjoy the red bean noodle at the beautiful autumn evening.

>> correct

>> We even invited our neighbors and our front yard was filled with people to enjoy the red bean noodle in a beautiful autumn evening.

The second memorable food is Kimchi stew made by my grandmother.

>> correct

The Kimchi stew did not look different, however, it had really rich flavor that was different from many other Kimchi stews.

>> The Kimchi stew did not look different, however, it really had a rich flavor that was different from many other Kimchi stews.

>> The Kimchi stew did not look different, however, it was savory that was different from many other Kimchi stews.

The slices of pork were added, which made it more delicious.

>> correct

I sometimes go to a restaurant that serve the same dishes, however, they taste different from what I remember.

>> correct

>> I sometimes go to a restaurant that serve the same dish, however, they taste different from what my grandmother cooked.

My wife even sometimes makes kimchi stew, but it is way different from the one.

>> Even my wife sometimes makes Kimchi stew, but it is way different from that one

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