What foods have you tasted which you will never forget for the rest of your life?
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I felt hungry after reading your composition. Hihihihi.
I want to try Kimchi stew.
Anyway, we are not going to have a class on Friday.
Because it is a national holiday in our country.
We can talk about it in class.
Teacher Nina
There are some foods that I still remember.
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Most of them are the foods when I’ve tasted in my younger days.
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>> Most of them are the foods that I have tasted when I was young.
The noodle with red bean soup was one of my favorites.
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My family grew wheat.
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When they harvested it for the first time a year, my grandmother used to make the noodle with the flour made from the first harvested wheat.
>> Did you mean: When they harvested it for the first time, my grandmother used to make noodle with flour made from the first harvested wheat.
>> My grandmother made a noodle with flour from the wheat that was harvested for the first time.
She made a dough, cut it into thin slices and put them into the boiled water with mashed red beans.
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We even invited our neighbors and our front yard was packed with people to enjoy the red bean noodle at the beautiful autumn evening.
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>> We even invited our neighbors and our front yard was filled with people to enjoy the red bean noodle in a beautiful autumn evening.
The second memorable food is Kimchi stew made by my grandmother.
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The Kimchi stew did not look different, however, it had really rich flavor that was different from many other Kimchi stews.
>> The Kimchi stew did not look different, however, it really had a rich flavor that was different from many other Kimchi stews.
>> The Kimchi stew did not look different, however, it was savory that was different from many other Kimchi stews.
The slices of pork were added, which made it more delicious.
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I sometimes go to a restaurant that serve the same dishes, however, they taste different from what I remember.
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>> I sometimes go to a restaurant that serve the same dish, however, they taste different from what my grandmother cooked.
My wife even sometimes makes kimchi stew, but it is way different from the one.
>> Even my wife sometimes makes Kimchi stew, but it is way different from that one
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