What fruits do you like to most?
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Ohh I mis-read the last homework as ‘favorite fruit’ !
My favorite fruit is ‘Mango’. There are various kinds of mangos, such as Apple mange, Gold mange, Wild mango and so on.
But these are very expensive in Korea.
The mango’s price per kilogram is about 760peso.
I heard that the mango’s price is very cheaper than here in Philippines.
So if I’m able to go to Philippines when travel abroad regulations for COVID-19 are eased, I would like to buy a lot of mangos there, and eat them as much as I can do.
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Good day, Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleMy favorite fruit is ‘Mango’.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Mango is my favorite fruit.
There are various kinds of mangos, such as Apple mange, Gold mange, Wild mango and so on.
>> There are various kinds of mangos, such as the Apple Mango, Golden Mango, Wild Mango, and so on.
But these are very expensive in Korea.
>> But the thing is, these are very expensive in Korea.
The mango’s price per kilogram is about 760peso.
>> The mango’s price per kilogram is about 760 pesos.
I heard that the mango’s price is very cheaper than here in Philippines.
I heard that the mango’s price is very cheaper than here in Philippines.
>> I heard that the mango’s price is way more cheaper in the Philippines than here in Korea.
So if I’m able to go to Philippines when travel abroad regulations for COVID-19 are eased, I would like to buy a lot of mangos there, and eat them as much as I can do.
>> So if I’m able to go to the Philippines when traveling abroad regulations for COVID-19 are eased, I would like to buy a lot of mangos there, and eat them as much as I can do.
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