What fun activities do you enjoy with your family?

2018-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

To tell you the truth, I would rather do activities alone than do it with my family. I have a lot of things that I would like to learn, do and play. So, my wife sometimes has a hard time because I tend to go out alone if my wife agree. I really would like to learn all kind of sports because I am not a guy who play sports very well and I think that I would be a good sports player, if I have gotten a proper training from the professional. This is the thing I really regret. However, I used to resent my parents for not educating me like my friends did. I was really selfish and too young to understand what my parents did and how much they love me. I want my children to learn anything that they would like to and I'd like to support them as long as I can do.

강사 첨삭

You are very supportive, Sir [이름]!


There\'s nothing more important than to be wholeheartedly supported by our parents. We, parents aren\'t perfect, but as long as we\'re able to raise our children well; we are on the right track.


~Teacher Eunice


To tell you the truth, I would rather do activities alone than do it with my family.

>>> correct! 

I have a lot of things that I would like to learn, do and play.
>>> There are a lot of things I would like to learn, do and play.

So, my wife sometimes has a hard time because I tend to go out alone if my wife agree.

>>> So, my wife sometimes had a hard time because I tend to go out alone if she agrees.

I really would like to learn all kind of sports because I am not a guy who play sports very well and I think that I would be a good sports player, if I have gotten a proper training from the professional. 

>>> I really would like to learn all kinds of sports because I am not a guy who play sports very well,  and I think that I would be a good sports player, if I have gotten a proper training from the professional. 

This is the thing I really regret.

>>> correct! 
 However, I used to resent my parents for not educating me like my friends did.

>>> However, I used to resent my parents for not educating me like my friends.

>>> OR: However, I resented the fact that my parents weren\'t able to provide good education to me.

I was really selfish and too young to understand what my parents did and how much they love me. 

>>> correct! 

I want my children to learn anything that they would like to and I\'d like to support them as long as I can do.

>>> correct! 

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