What fun activities do you enjoy with your family?
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You are very supportive, Sir [이름]!
There\'s nothing more important than to be wholeheartedly supported by our parents. We, parents aren\'t perfect, but as long as we\'re able to raise our children well; we are on the right track.
~Teacher Eunice
To tell you the truth, I would rather do activities alone than do it with my family.
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I have a lot of things that I would like to learn, do and play.
>>> There are a lot of things I would like to learn, do and play.
So, my wife sometimes has a hard time because I tend to go out alone if my wife agree.
>>> So, my wife sometimes had a hard time because I tend to go out alone if she agrees.
I really would like to learn all kind of sports because I am not a guy who play sports very well and I think that I would be a good sports player, if I have gotten a proper training from the professional.
>>> I really would like to learn all kinds of sports because I am not a guy who play sports very well, and I think that I would be a good sports player, if I have gotten a proper training from the professional.
This is the thing I really regret.
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However, I used to resent my parents for not educating me like my friends did.
>>> However, I used to resent my parents for not educating me like my friends.
>>> OR: However, I resented the fact that my parents weren\'t able to provide good education to me.
I was really selfish and too young to understand what my parents did and how much they love me.
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I want my children to learn anything that they would like to and I\'d like to support them as long as I can do.
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