What fusion-food would you like to try?
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I\'d like to try fusion-food a lot. You know, there are many kinds of fusion restaurants in Brisbane because Australia\'s food is rubbish as my teacher told me. Sometimes, I don\'t understand why she said it [이름]ce England has an only Fish and Chips. It doesn\'t make sense. By the way, I want to try Colombia, and Taiwan fusion-food. Especially, Tom Yum Goong that I want to try the best is. And, crocodile meat. It\'s very famous with Chinese\'s food in Australia.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I\'d like to try fusion-food a lot.
>> CORRECT!You know, there are many kinds of fusion restaurants in Brisbane because Australia\'s food is rubbish as my teacher told me.
>> CORRECT!Sometimes, I don\'t understand why she said it [이름]ce England has an only Fish and Chips.
>> Sometimes, I don\'t understand why she said it [이름]ce England has only Fish and Chips.
It doesn\'t make sense.
>> CORRECT!By the way, I want to try Colombia, and Taiwan fusion-food.
>> By the way, I want to try Colombian and Taiwanese fusion-food.
Especially, Tom Yum Goong that I want to try the best is.
>> Especially, Tom Yum Goong is the one that I want to try the best. [Tom Yum Goong is from Thailand. :D ~ T. Camille]
And, crocodile meat.
>> And, I would also like to try crocodile meat.
It\'s very famous with Chinese\'s food in Australia.
>> It\'s a very famous Chinese food in Australia.
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