What game I play with my mom
학생이 쓴 원문
I play board game with my mom.
That is because board game don\'t have addiction.
My second reason is it is very fun.
My third reason is the board game is have various things.
Finally, it is not dangerous.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I think board games are better than computer games. They are beneficial for your development, so keep playing them.
- Teacher Debbie
>> I play board games with my mom.
That is because board game don\'t have addiction.
>> That is because they aren\'t addictive.
My second reason is it is very fun.
>> They are enjoyable.
My third reason is the board game is have various things.
>> In addition, there are various forms of board games.
Finally, it is not dangerous.
>> They are also not dangerous.
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