What genre of music do you prefer listening to? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
The genre of music l listen to varies depending on my mood and behavior of the day.
When I feel excited or do active activities that day, I usually listen to fast-beat music or dance music. For example, when I exercise, drive or cheer up to work.
To add to the situation, I usually listen to classical music when I read a book or concentrate on something.
But when I don\'t feel good or do quiet activities that day, I usually listen to slow-beat music or ballads.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering the homework question. You did a great job in composing your essay! I just did some minor corrections. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My music preferences change depending on my mood and daily activities.
When I feel excited or do active activities that day, I usually listen to fast-beat music or dance music.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Fast-paced music is my choice when I feel excited or active.
For example, when I exercise, drive or cheer up to work.
>> For example, I listen to them when I exercise, drive or cheer up to work.
>> For example, I listen to them when I exercise, drive or cheer up to work.
To add to the situation, I usually listen to classical music when I read a book or concentrate on something.
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: In addition, I usually listen to classical music when I read a book or need to concentrate.
But when I don\'t feel good or do quiet activities that day, I usually listen to slow-beat music or ballads.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: However, when I don’t feel good or do quieter activities, I usually listen to slow-tempo music or ballads.
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