What gift do you want to rieceive on your birthday?

2023-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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My gift I rieceive in my birthday gift is Diform block and a cars. I want to make some more things.re And cars are I make more racing cars. These are I rieceive on my birthday.

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T. DON

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My gift I rieceive in my birthday gift is Diform block and a cars.
I want to make some more things.re
And cars are I make more racing cars.
These are I rieceive on my birthday.

>> The gift I received on my birthday was Diform block and cars. I want to make things using Diform block. I also want more racing cars. These are the gifts that I received on my birthday.

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