What gift would you most like to get?

2019-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Right now I don’t want anything. I mean gift that is physical thing. Buy in the future I want to go traveling. Oh you can think traveling equals money. Yes. But I mean traveling contains parent’s permission and money.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jenna!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Right now I don’t want anything. 

>> Right now, I don’t want anything. 

I mean gift that is physical thing. 

>> I mean, a gift that is a material thing. 

Buy in the future I want to go traveling. 

>> But in the future, I want to go traveling. 

Oh you can think traveling equals money. 

>> Oh, you can think traveling equals money.

Yes. But I mean traveling contains parent’s permission and money.

>> Yes, but I mean, traveling includes having parent’s permission and having money.

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