What gift would you most like to get?
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강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Right now I don’t want anything.
>> Right now, I don’t want anything.
I mean gift that is physical thing.
>> I mean, a gift that is a material thing.
Buy in the future I want to go traveling.
>> But in the future, I want to go traveling.
Oh you can think traveling equals money.
>> Oh, you can think traveling equals money.
Yes. But I mean traveling contains parent’s permission and money.
>> Yes, but I mean, traveling includes having parent’s permission and having money.
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