What gives you the courage of working in the Middle East?
학생이 쓴 원문
The source of my work in middle east is money
I want to make money a lot.
Here give me money more than Korea.
And I like to experience.
I want to meet new people, learn new thing
So, I decided to work in middle east.
강사 첨삭
Jane! Thank you for writing your thought. This is one of the best things to express yourself without someone interrupting you ^^
Have fun learning!
T. Aki~
The source of my work in middle east is money.
>>> The source of my work in the Middle East is money.
OR >>> The purpose of my stay in the Middle East is money.
I want to make money a lot.
>>> I want to make a lot of money.
>>> I want to earn a lot.
Here give me money more than Korea.
>>> Here, they give me more money than in Korea.
>>> I have a higher salary here than in Korea.
And I like to experience.
>>> And I\'d like to experience many things.
I want to meet new people, learn new thing
>>> CORRECT!
So, I decided to work in middle east.
>>> So, I decided to work in the Middle East.
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