What good activity can you recommend when I visit your country?
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At Namsan Tower, you can enjoy the night view of Seoul.
In Myeong-dong, you can taste street food and buy the souvenir.
In addition, you can visit the Chosun`s palace, \'Gyeongbokgung\'. There, you can try on the traditionnal Korean dress, \'Hanbok\'
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Hello there, Jane!
I Googled all these places and most Filipinos go to these places. These are places of culture and traditions, truly, all a must-see. I cannot wait to be in all these places!
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-T. Donna
>> Correct!
In Myeong-dong, you can taste street food and buy the souvenir.
>> In Myeong-dong, you can taste street food and buy souvenirs.
In addition, you can visit the Chosun`s palace, \'Gyeongbokgung\'. There, you can try on the traditionnal Korean dress, \'Hanbok\'
>> In addition, you can visit the Chosun`s Palace, \'Gyeongbokgung\'. There, you can try on the traditional Korean dress, \'Hanbok\'
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