What government policy do you find very helpful for you? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there’s no policy that is helpful for me, especially for sex offenses and stalking. As a woman, I’m easily exposed to these crimes if I live alone in Korea. However, offenders can get away with soft punishment. I wish the new government has to enforce or change law clauses related to it.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Judy!
This is not the first time to hear this kind of plight coming from a woman like you. I actually had a student previously who had been a victim of video recording wehie working out in the gym. Of course it was not resolved. I hope that your govenrment will care more for women. Thank you so much for sharing your concern about government policies for women. It was a very good homework answer, Excellent job!
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
As a woman, I’m easily exposed to these crimes if I live alone in Korea.
>> Correct!
However, offenders can get away with soft punishment.
>> Correct!
Or: However, offenders can get away with soft punishments.
I wish the new government has to enforce or change law clauses related to it.
>> I wish the new government will/shal enforce or change law clauses related to it.
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