What greeting kind of annoys you?

2020-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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First, There are people who say hello with a bad expression. Then I feel bad, too. Well, and I don\'t like people who greet only with their eyes. I think it\'s better not to say hello like that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]~
Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work. See you in class!

Here are your corrections:

First, There are people who say hello with a bad expression.

>> CORRECT; but the \"There\" should have a small letter \"t\" (there)

Then I feel bad, too.

>> If this happens, then I feel bad too.

Well, and I don\'t like people who greet only with their eyes.

>> Well, I don\'t like those people who greet only with their eyes.

I think it\'s better not to say hello like that.

>> I think it\'s better not to greet like that.

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