what happen to me:(

2011-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

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last night i went to bed late time. and this morning, after checking your call record, i was frustrated. as you know, i will go to hongkong next week. and i have to make a project about hongkong. today, i met my teammade. and we had confliction. still,i have lots of thing to do. anyway, i will get your call tomorrow!!!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I hope that everything will push through...^^ Have faith.. Talk to you tomorrow!~~ last night i went to bed late time.>>Last night, I went to bed late.and this morning, after checking your call record, i was frustrated.>>Just this morning, I was frustrated after checking your call recording.as you know, i will go to hongkong next week.>>Correctand i have to make a project about hongkong.>>Correcttoday, i met my teammade. and we had confliction.>>Today, I met my team mate and had a conflict.still,i have lots of thing to do.>>Still, I have to do a lot of things.anyway, i will get your call tomorrow!!!!!!!!! >>Correct

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